I see, my steel cage on wheels
I hear, beeps as I wait to pay
I feel, the cold air of the freezers
I smell, the burning scent of cleaning items
Where Am I?
The supermarket
Tuesday 15 October 2019
Where am I, sences writing
Where Am I?
I see, my steel cage on wheels
I hear, beeps as I wait to pay
I feel, the cold air of the freezers
I smell, the burning scent of cleaning items
Where Am I?
The supermarket
I see, my steel cage on wheels
I hear, beeps as I wait to pay
I feel, the cold air of the freezers
I smell, the burning scent of cleaning items
Where Am I?
The supermarket
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Kia ora. I am Melissa from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how descriptive your writing was
I learnt that you can make really descriptive writing out of the topic, the supermarket
Maybe you could add a nice vibrant colour for your background instead of a plain white background.
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